As I was rewriting the conclusion I realised how often I start on sentences and then ignore them. The following is a snippet of abandoned sentences from one paragraph of my conclusion.
As a result, the prototype developed to test the concept
The recommendations are taken from a substantial item catalogue of tens of millions of items.
Our results show that describe the concept here
Secondly, the accuracy and performance results
We identified a number of improvements that can be made:
- scaling routing
- minimizing inter-node traffic
- auto-adjusting load
Throwaway-prototyping…